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Introduction (excerpt). A growing proportion of undergraduates work part-time during term, often to cover living costs. Research has linked long working hours with lower grades and higher stress, but fewer studies have examined how work affects students' beliefs about their own academic ability, known as academic self-efficacy. Self-efficacy matters because it predicts persistence and effort independently of prior achievement [citations]. Moreover, some research suggests that moderate work may build time management skills that could support confidence [citations]. The present study therefore asked whether weekly work hours are associated with academic self-efficacy, and whether the relationship differs between students working fewer or more than 15 hours per week.

Method (excerpt). Participants were 214 undergraduates (aged 18 to 34) recruited through university email lists. They completed an online questionnaire including weekly paid work hours, a validated academic self-efficacy scale and demographic questions. Students who did not work formed the comparison group. Multiple regression was used to examine the association between work hours and self-efficacy, controlling for year of study and prior grades.

Results (excerpt). Students working more than 15 hours per week reported lower self-efficacy than non-working students, after controlling for year of study and prior grades. Students working 15 hours or fewer did not differ significantly from non-working students. Table 2 presents the regression coefficients.

Discussion (excerpt). The findings suggest that the relationship between work and academic confidence is not linear: moderate hours appear unrelated to self-efficacy, while longer hours are associated with lower confidence. This pattern is consistent with research identifying a threshold beyond which work begins to compete with study [citations]. Because the design was cross-sectional, it cannot show whether long hours reduce confidence or whether less confident students choose to work more. Longitudinal studies following students across a year would help clarify direction.

Thesis paragraph. Cities facing rising temperatures and pressure on public space should convert a portion of on-street parking into green space, because doing so reduces local heat, supports local businesses more than critics expect, and returns public land to uses that benefit more residents. While the change raises legitimate concerns about access for disabled drivers and deliveries, these can be addressed through careful design rather than by keeping parking as the default use of street space.

Body paragraph. The economic objection, that removing parking harms local shops, is weaker than it first appears. Studies of shopping streets in several cities have found that retailers tend to overestimate how many of their customers arrive by car [citations]. Pedestrians and cyclists may spend less per visit but visit more often, so their total spending can match or exceed that of drivers [citations]. This does not mean every street suits conversion, but it does mean that the assumption that parking equals trade should be tested with local data before it blocks change.

This study examined whether part-time work is associated with academic self-efficacy among undergraduates. The results suggest a threshold: working up to 15 hours per week was not associated with lower confidence, whereas longer hours were. These findings add to research on student employment by shifting attention from grades to students' beliefs about their own ability, which shape effort and persistence. For universities, the results point towards supporting students who work long hours, for example through flexible deadlines or timetabling, rather than discouraging work altogether. Future longitudinal research could establish whether long hours reduce self-efficacy over time or whether less confident students are more likely to take on extra work.