Good essays are rarely written; they are rewritten. The difference between a first draft and a final essay is usually not new research but revision: sharpening the thesis, reordering paragraphs, deepening analysis, cutting what does not belong, and then cleaning up sentences, citations and formatting.
Many students skip straight to proofreading, fixing commas in paragraphs that should have been cut. This guide explains how to revise in the right order, how to use tutor feedback (including feedback on earlier essays), and the mistakes that markers flag most often, with practical fixes for each.
Quick Answer
Revise from big to small. First check the argument: does the thesis answer the question, and does every paragraph support it? Then check structure and paragraphs, using a reverse outline. Next edit sentences for clarity and concision, then proofread for grammar, spelling and punctuation, and finally check citations and formatting. Leave time between drafting and revising, read aloud, and work through any tutor feedback point by point.
Revising vs Editing vs Proofreading
| Stage | Focus | Typical questions |
|---|---|---|
| Revising | Argument, structure, content | Does the essay answer the question? Is the evidence strong enough? Is anything missing or irrelevant? |
| Editing | Paragraphs and sentences | Is each sentence clear? Are transitions smooth? Is the tone academic? |
| Proofreading | Surface errors | Spelling, grammar, punctuation, typos, consistency |
| Formatting and referencing | Presentation and citations | Does layout match the style? Do citations match the reference list? |
Work through them in this order. There is no point polishing a sentence in a paragraph you are about to delete.
Step 1: Get Some Distance
You cannot see the problems in an essay you finished ten minutes ago, because you read what you meant rather than what you wrote.
Leave the draft for at least a few hours and ideally a day. Then change how it looks: print it, change the font, or read it on a different device. Reading aloud, or using text-to-speech, catches clumsy sentences and missing words that silent reading misses.
Step 2: Revise the Argument
- Reread the question and rubric. Does your thesis answer exactly what was asked?
- Read the introduction and conclusion together. Do they describe the same argument? If the conclusion is sharper, your thesis probably moved during drafting; update the introduction.
- Is the argument balanced? Have you addressed the strongest counterargument or limitation?
- Is any key evidence missing, or any claim unsupported?
Step 3: Check Structure with a Reverse Outline
A reverse outline is the fastest way to see your essay's real structure. Write one line per paragraph summarizing its main point, then read the list.
Reverse outline of a draft:
1. Intro: social media changed campaigns, but added to traditional methods.
2. Targeted online ads.
3. History of television advertising.
4. Volunteer mobilization online.
5. More on targeted ads and data.
6. Canvassing still central.
7. Conclusion.
Diagnosis: paragraph 3 is background that belongs, shortened, in the introduction; paragraphs 2 and 5 cover the same point and should be merged; there is no paragraph on regulation, which the thesis implies.
Step 4: Revise Paragraphs
| Check | Fix |
|---|---|
| Does the paragraph start with a clear topic sentence? | Rewrite the first sentence as a claim linked to the thesis |
| Does it make only one main point? | Split it, or cut the second point |
| Is there more analysis than quotation or description? | Trim evidence; explain what it shows |
| Does it connect to the paragraphs around it? | Add a transition that links the ideas, not just a linking word |
| Is every source cited? | Add citations as you go |
Step 5: Edit Sentences
Clear academic writing is precise and concise, not complicated. Look for these patterns:
| Problem | Before | After |
|---|---|---|
| Wordiness | Due to the fact that | Because |
| Weak opening | There are many studies that show | Many studies show |
| Unnecessary passive | It was found by the researchers that | The researchers found that |
| Nominalisation | Made a decision to conduct an analysis of | Decided to analyze |
| Vague words | This thing has a big impact on society | Rising rents displace low-income households |
| Informal tone | Loads of people think | Many commentators argue |
Also vary sentence length. A run of long sentences tires the reader; an occasional short one gives emphasis.
Worked Example: Revising One Paragraph
Draft: "There are lots of studies about social media and elections. Smith (2019) says that social media was used a lot in campaigns. It was also found by Jones (2020) that young people use social media. This shows that social media is really important in elections nowadays."
Revised: "Social media changed how campaigns reached younger voters in particular. Smith (2019) documents a sharp rise in campaign spending on targeted online advertising, while Jones (2020) shows that voters under 25 encountered most campaign content through social platforms rather than television. Together these findings suggest that campaigns moved resources to where younger voters' attention already was, which explains why the change was most visible in efforts to mobilize first-time voters."
The revision opens with a claim, replaces vague words ("lots", "a lot", "really important") with specific findings, converts the passive "it was found by" into active voice, connects the two sources instead of listing them, and ends by explaining what the evidence means. The sources named are illustrative.
Getting a Second Reader
Another reader spots problems you cannot, because they only have the page, not what you meant. Ask a classmate, a writing center tutor or a friend to read the draft with two questions in mind: "What do you think my main argument is?" and "Where did you get lost?" If their answer to the first question does not match your thesis, the argument needs work.
Most universities have a writing center offering free appointments; book early, because slots fill up near deadlines. Peer feedback should help you revise your own work; check your institution's rules on how much help is allowed.
Step 6: Proofread
- Proofread on paper or in a different format from the one you wrote in.
- Read slowly, one line at a time; some people read backwards sentence by sentence to focus on errors rather than meaning.
- Do one pass for each of your known weaknesses (for example apostrophes, comma splices or tense consistency).
- Use spellcheck and grammar tools as a first filter, but check their suggestions: they miss errors and sometimes introduce them.
- Check consistency: British or American spelling, capitalization, numbers, abbreviations.
Using Tutor Feedback
Feedback is the most valuable resource you have for improving, but it only helps if you act on it. Whether the comments are on a draft of this essay or on a previous assignment, work through them systematically.
- Read everything once without reacting. Then reread when you are calm.
- Sort comments by type: argument and content, structure, use of sources, expression, referencing.
- Look for patterns across essays. If two tutors say "more analysis needed", that is your main target.
- Translate vague comments into actions. Use the table below.
- Keep a feedback log and check new essays against it before submission.
- Ask if a comment is unclear. Most tutors welcome questions in office hours.
| Tutor comment | What it usually means | Action |
|---|---|---|
| "Too descriptive" | You report rather than analyze | After each piece of evidence, add sentences explaining its significance |
| "Unclear argument" | The thesis is vague or paragraphs do not support it | Rewrite the thesis as a specific claim; link every topic sentence to it |
| "Needs more evidence" | Claims are unsupported | Add cited research, data or examples for each main claim |
| "Answer the question" | You wrote about the topic, not the task | Reread the instruction word and align the thesis to it |
| "Check referencing" | Citation or reference errors | Audit every citation against the style guide and reference list |
| "Lacks critical engagement" | Sources are summarized, not evaluated | Compare sources, note limitations, show where they agree or conflict |
If you are revising a draft after feedback, keep a short table listing each comment and what you changed. Some courses require it, and it helps you check nothing was missed.
The Most Common Essay Mistakes
| Mistake | Why it costs marks | Fix |
|---|---|---|
| Not answering the question | The essay may be good but off-task | Underline the instruction word; test the thesis against it |
| Vague thesis | No argument to follow | Make a specific, arguable claim |
| Summary instead of analysis | Shows knowledge, not thinking | Explain how and why after each piece of evidence |
| Unsupported claims | Weakens credibility | Cite evidence or soften the claim |
| Over-quoting | Your voice disappears | Paraphrase and quote only key phrases |
| Poor paragraphing | Hard to follow | One point per paragraph with a topic sentence |
| Referencing errors | Loses marks and risks plagiarism concerns | Check every citation against the list |
| Ignoring the word count | Penalties in many courses | Stay within the allowed range (often plus or minus 10%) |
| New ideas in the conclusion | Undermines the argument's shape | Move them into the body or cut them |
Cutting or Expanding to the Word Count
If you are over the limit, cut in this order: repetition, background the reader does not need, weak examples, then wordy phrasing.
If you are under, do not pad; deepen analysis of your existing evidence, address a counterargument, or add a well-chosen example. Check your course's rules on what counts towards the limit (references, headings and tables are often excluded, but not always).
Final Pre-Submission Checklist
- The thesis answers the exact question asked.
- Every paragraph supports the thesis and has a clear topic sentence.
- Evidence is analyzed, not just presented.
- Counterarguments or limitations are addressed.
- Sentences are clear and the tone is academic.
- Spelling, grammar and punctuation are checked.
- Citations and the reference list match and follow the required style.
- Formatting meets the brief (see our essay formatting guide).
- The word count is within the allowed range.
- Tutor feedback from earlier work has been applied.
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Frequently Asked Questions
Revising changes content and structure: argument, evidence, paragraph order. Editing improves sentences, clarity and style. Proofreading fixes surface errors.
At least two: a first draft and a revised draft, followed by an editing and proofreading pass. Longer essays often benefit from three.
Ideally a day. Even a few hours helps you see the draft as a reader would.
No. They catch many surface errors but miss problems of meaning, structure and argument, and some suggestions are wrong.
Sort comments by type, look for patterns, turn each into an action, and check your new essay against that list before submitting.
Most universities allow proofreading and feedback on clarity, but not someone rewriting your argument. Check your institution's policy.
Cut repetition, unnecessary background and weak examples first, then tighten wordy sentences.
Yes. Editors improve clarity, grammar, structure feedback and referencing while keeping your ideas and argument your own.